House Style Guide

  • The intention of this style guide is to advise on best practice for ensuring readability
  • To ensure consistency throughout your book
  • To help you to write in a way that will get your message across consistently and effectively
  • To avoid common errors

General

  • We mostly use British or Canadian English. If you write in American English, it will be a lot harder for me to proofread as I don’t understand the rules of American English style.
  • In British English, use a single quote mark for colloquial expressions, and double quote marks for reported speech.
  • Please use e.g. and i.e. with periods / full stops.
  • Please spell authors’ initials without periods / full stops, e.g. JRR Tolkien.
  • For grammar-checking, we recommend Harper: the only grammar-checker that does not use AI. It also has Canadian English as well as US and UK English.

Plain English (for non-fiction)

  • Avoid excessive formality (e.g. “subsequent approval of which will be a pre-requisite to the raising of any internal order mechanism” – what does this mean?)
  • Avoid passive voice unless you’re deliberately de-emphasising the source of the action.
  • Explain any in-group jargon that you use, e.g. “casting a circle (delineating the space to be used for a ritual)”. You can use discretion for this, because it depends on your audience.
  • Expand acronyms the first time you use them, e.g. “LGBTQIA (lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer, intersex, asexual)”
  • Avoid using unfamiliar terms without any explanation
  • Explain procedures step-by-step. This makes them more accessible.
  • Separate dependent sub-clauses with a comma
  • Avoid over-long sentences
  • Avoid run-on sentences, as they are ungrammatical. This will make your writing sharper and punchier.
  • Use nouns and verbs correctly
  • Capitalise correctly and consistently
  • You can spell ‘meow’ as meow or miaow, regardless of The Guardian’s preferences

Plain English (for fiction)

  • Avoid passive voice unless you’re deliberately de-emphasising the source of the action.
  • Expand acronyms the first time you use them, e.g. “LGBTQIA (lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer, intersex, asexual)”
  • Separate dependent sub-clauses with a comma
  • Avoid run-on sentences, as they are ungrammatical. This will make your writing sharper and punchier.
  • Consider revising over-long sentences with many dependent subclauses, unless you’re using them for deliberate effect in the manner of Patrick Leigh Fermor.

Capitalisation

  • If you’re writing about contemporary Pagans, use a capital P
  • If you’re writing about ancient pagans or polytheists, use a lower-case p
  • Use a capital letter for Druids, Wiccans, Heathens, Kemetics, Religio Romana (and any other contemporary Pagan tradition)
  • Use lower-case letters for the name of a philosophy, e.g. polytheism, animism, anarchism (unless it is a specific named tradition like Stoicism or Epicureanism)
  • All proper nouns should be capitalised (unless it’s the name of a person who spells their name in lower case, like bell hooks or e e cummings)
  • Use all caps for acronyms (e.g. UNDRIP, UNWRA, LGBTQ+) but spell out what the acronym stands for the first time you use it.
  • When you spell out an acronym, use title case, e.g. United Nations Declaration of the Rights of Indigenous Peoples.

Punctuation

The finer rules of punctuation can be a bit of a dark art. Check out our blogpost about the Oxford comma and other punctuation, and the differences between US and UK English.

We recommend Harper: the only grammar-checker that does not use AI. It also has Canadian English as well as US and UK English. Unfortunately, it doesn’t flag run-on sentences.

Scribblr has an excellent set of guides to punctuation.

Italicisation

  • There is no need to italicise foreign words. Just put a translation in brackets after the word.
  • Italicise book titles, film/movie titles, TV shows, etc.

Footnotes and endnotes

  • Add footnotes with citations to explain the source or the context of your assertions. This saves readers from flipping to the back of the book, only to find a note that says ‘Ibid.
  • Add the citation in endnotes as well

Citations

Exercises

  • Place exercises and reflections at the end of each chapter
  • If you really need to place them in the middle of the chapter, provide a list of exercises at the start of the book

Diagrams and illustrations

Please use the highest resolution of image available to you. Bear in mind that the image will be reproduced in monochrome (black and white), so consider whether it will work in monochrome.

For photos, use the JPEG file type. For diagrams and drawings, use GIF or PNG.

Headings

Make sure to use the heading styles provided in your word processing software. This enables us to create a table of contents for your manuscript (important for both the print and ebook versions).

  • Heading 1 – the title of each chapter
  • Heading 2 – section headings
  • Heading 3 – subsection headings
  • Heading 4 – if you need a subsubheading!

I personally prefer sentence case for headings, but if you prefer title case, go ahead – just use it consistently!

Font

Please do not use Times New Roman, Arial, Comic Sans, or Comic Neue. This is because I find these fonts aesthetically unpleasing.

Inclusive terminology

  • Black people (not black people)
  • the Deaf community, Deaf people
  • Disabled people (not “people with a disability”)
  • Disabled (not “handicapped”)
  • Indigenous people (not “indigenous people”, and definitely not “native” or “aboriginal” unless you are Indigenous and you identify that way). Where possible, use the name of the specific First Nation – the name they call themselves, and if necessary, the name they’re generally known by in brackets, e.g. Haudenosaunee (Iroquois).
  • LGBTQIA, LGBTQ2SIA, 2SLGBTQIA, or LGBTQ+ (don’t omit the T for trans or the Q for queer)
  • Neurodiverse or neurodivergent — but don’t refer to individuals as neurodiverse or neurodivergent; it’s a community term. See this Psychology Today article, and this language guide. Always be guided by the preferred terminology of the individual if you’re writing about a specific person.
  • People who menstruate, people in menopause, pregnant people (because trans men and nonbinary people can also experience these states)

The Guardian has an excellent house style guide for respectful terminology. Where this guide disagrees with theirs, please use these guidelines; otherwise, please use theirs.

Dates and times

  • Dates should be formatted as follows:
    • Wednesday, 1 July, 2026
    • 1 July 2026
    • July 2026
    • 2026
  • …unless you’re writing a science fiction or fantasy story about a different culture where they use a different system
  • If you’re writing about the distant past, please use BCE (Before Common Era) and CE (Common Era).
  • Times should be formatted as follows:
    • In a paragraph, write “at eight o’clock in the morning” or “at quarter to eight”
    • In a footnote or an announcement, write the time as 8:45 am / 8:30 pm

Numbers

  • In a paragraph, write the number between one and ten as words, but any number higher than that in numerals, unless it is a vague approximation, e.g. “there were dozens of people at the spaceport”
  • In a footnote or an announcement, write the number as a numeral

If you have any questions, please let us know!